tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post1303178554044068617..comments2023-10-06T01:40:23.135-07:00Comments on Wander without being lost: And burningWanderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-48866043326162551222012-08-04T18:12:28.962-07:002012-08-04T18:12:28.962-07:00I like this combinationg of screaming, machines an...I like this combinationg of screaming, machines and eventually burning. There's a great rhythm to it... reocurring, bowing out and returning to the central theme.Ben Dittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10637997946476963455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-89648117116627782942012-08-04T13:29:51.560-07:002012-08-04T13:29:51.560-07:00GAWD that image creeps me out!
Sometimes my best ...GAWD that image creeps me out!<br /><br />Sometimes my best poems are written that way...a line that comes when I'm half awake. They are like kite strings we grab, and away we go!!!Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-9446520268317763022012-08-03T19:12:15.035-07:002012-08-03T19:12:15.035-07:00This reminds me of those moments I go for spontane...This reminds me of those moments I go for spontaneous drives without a destination... usually with deep thoughts and a few stresses sitting on my shoulder. It's usually a great place to scream because if you're driving with no one around, no one will hear. ;)<br /><br />Great emotion!JiRahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16818496685054595547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-50448728878617182202012-08-03T18:49:46.388-07:002012-08-03T18:49:46.388-07:00dang bro...the image is as vivid as your words.......dang bro...the image is as vivid as your words....agree in hoping this is not real, but only symbolism...i know we all have those internal struggles some more intense than others...and in light of the present circumstances with health, it could be very real....intense man....hope you have a good weekend...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-79326838077260381462012-08-03T16:26:20.961-07:002012-08-03T16:26:20.961-07:00With Mary. You write like I do :). Nobody even kno...With Mary. You write like I do :). Nobody even knows what's real and sometimes people worry when I write stuff that shows a dark side or struggle.<br /><br />I like the image captured here of an internal struggle. It seems we all have opposing sides in us at times. You've written it very vividly. And the last line, I think, perhaps, we have all had a moment of feeling those feelings. Some moments are longer than others.Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-83055575826188227492012-08-03T15:42:44.470-07:002012-08-03T15:42:44.470-07:00Thanks mary, no not autobiographical ...a line occ...Thanks mary, no not autobiographical ...a line occurred to me and the rest of the poem built up arround itWanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-89238994530984988572012-08-03T15:28:59.544-07:002012-08-03T15:28:59.544-07:00Global Conflict
When the day's ended
and the ...<b>Global Conflict</b><br /><br />When the day's ended<br />and the toys are put away<br />back in the boxes<br />of original<br />hope and care for you and me -<br />that's when I pray you<br />find your heart's divan<br />and someone fans your hot head<br />like they do in tales<br />of Arabian<br />sacred moonlit evenings,<br />your back placed in trust.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-47146300599225244792012-08-03T15:20:54.681-07:002012-08-03T15:20:54.681-07:00I so, so hope that's not autobiographical. Rea...I so, so hope that's not autobiographical. Really strong imagery here.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.com