tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post7407144951752715615..comments2023-10-06T01:40:23.135-07:00Comments on Wander without being lost: The mag 242Wanderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12384347526625976847noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-68404120128720241352014-10-23T15:35:55.257-07:002014-10-23T15:35:55.257-07:00The plaintiff first line - nobody could resist rea...The plaintiff first line - nobody could resist reading on. Beautiful. Helen Killeen Bauch McHarguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07042488205276127209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-65563416691656905632014-10-23T13:37:19.121-07:002014-10-23T13:37:19.121-07:00Unexpected twist at the end...nicely done...Unexpected twist at the end...nicely done...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-48686302233711144292014-10-22T03:56:53.049-07:002014-10-22T03:56:53.049-07:00Oh how i have wanted to call in an airstrike on my...Oh how i have wanted to call in an airstrike on my own position ...at mommies graveside Silent Otto https://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-55585840347871331422014-10-22T03:45:58.730-07:002014-10-22T03:45:58.730-07:00As I read this it's ambiguous whether the narr...As I read this it's ambiguous whether the narrator's mother died or just left. And I think it really works well, as I think children often feel abandoned when a parent dies. You touch some very deep hurt here either way. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-86241612541883739522014-10-21T06:54:57.745-07:002014-10-21T06:54:57.745-07:00A most unique response to Tess' challenge. .. ...A most unique response to Tess' challenge. .. I enjoyed this.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-45815182870600477392014-10-21T06:20:14.073-07:002014-10-21T06:20:14.073-07:00Thought provoking...certainly something we always ...Thought provoking...certainly something we always ponder...do our loved ones still see what they have left behind....I believe they do....great piece Chris! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-74184834049202923552014-10-21T01:59:52.353-07:002014-10-21T01:59:52.353-07:00In a word, fascinating...In a word, fascinating...Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-50542537028485177422014-10-20T17:13:01.047-07:002014-10-20T17:13:01.047-07:00Abandonment breeds anger, how sad. I believe those...Abandonment breeds anger, how sad. I believe those who've passed are still near, but those who've just left? Without knowing the reasons, hard to judge. But always remember, more their loss, not yours.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-74981881701934680502014-10-20T14:54:57.328-07:002014-10-20T14:54:57.328-07:00Such a strong poem...wonderful.Such a strong poem...wonderful.Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7935594309491848290.post-29099680395218593172014-10-20T14:25:48.983-07:002014-10-20T14:25:48.983-07:00i would like to think that they can see..i hope th...i would like to think that they can see..i hope they can see what we made of ourselves after them...and the influence they had on us...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com