How
lucky am I
My
hands in your Hair
Holding
you just so…kissing you
Not willing
to let go
The clamoring
of the world fades
In your
lips I find No need to breathe
So willing
to leave the world behind
My
hands in your hair
Your lips
on mine
Feeling
you melt into me
How lucky
am I
Chris
McQueeney 9/6/12 8:02 P.M.
You have the most incredible genius of repetition, Chris.
ReplyDeleteHmmmm, are you in love, or like, or maybe something near :-). Me, being curious, I have to smile as I read. Ever the romantic!
ReplyDeletemost def....but hey i dont mind being lucky in love...love the feel of this piece man....
ReplyDeleteChris...
ReplyDeleteWhat a heartfelt piece of work.
Very creative and beautiful.
Loved your Romantic 55
Thanks for playing, I appreciate you sharing such Top Notch entertainment with us all, please have a Kick Ass Week-End
This is incredible! But that pic is creepy (but cool) as hell, not sure it goes with the poem. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteVery lucky, if you can keep it going.
ReplyDeleteLove the words... but the photo selection leads me to a different place!
ReplyDeleteAdding the picture with the poem makes me see the red of sarcasm...
ReplyDeleteYou will become a famous romance writer...I can see it now! Ha. Oh! Crap! I will have to compete with you for business...
ReplyDeleteThe Stealthy Ninja will have an eye on THAT.
honestly, not my favorite (i can say this after loving a hundred of your poems, right?) it doesn''t take me far enough into the passionate danger of yielding and letting go
ReplyDeletexoxo
kj
the morning after:
ReplyDeleteoh jeez. maybe i should have said 'i did too'
:^)
love you chris
kj
Hi Kj:-)
ReplyDeleteYou are welcome to like or dislike any of my poems or pros my friend...and feel free to day so!
♥
ReplyDeleteSo sweet!
ReplyDeletesounds like you're pretty damn lucky!
ReplyDelete:)