Monday, September 10, 2012

Ruing the day





At a loss


Are we disgruntled today
are we gasping
and wheezing at a loss
for breath
cursing and ruing the day
the gas took our
life away
but did not cause
our death

Chris McQueeney     9/9/12    10:03P.M.


4 comments:

  1. the gas took our life away but did not cause death....yikes dude...grisly...and while related to war i think it makes a nice statement too on our dependence on oil...

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  2. Hmm. I could think on those words quite a long time. This 'taking of life' you mention is multi-faceted. I like this poem.

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