Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Just a Tuesday



Have I

Oh what a poor
And shallow
Soul
Would I have
If
For an instant
The tiniest of moments
Were I to forget
How awfully lovely
The smiles only
My Children
Can make
Oh what a poor
And shallow
Soul
Have I
Have I

Chris McQueeney    1/15/13    1:35 P.M.

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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous1/15/13, 1:55 PM

    It's what you don't say here that intruiges me. Great write x

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  2. Other Mary1/15/13, 2:03 PM

    This one outta be set to music.

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  3. Brian Miller1/15/13, 2:09 PM

    there is something of the smiles of our children...even in the darkest hour they can bring us back....i know that surely...smiles.

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  4. Scarlet1/15/13, 5:37 PM

    I like the smiles of children, they make me joy and depth ~ Good one Chris ~

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  5. Beachanny1/15/13, 6:37 PM

    Terse, beautiful, evocative. A true poem that elicits much in a few words.

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  6. Optimistic Existentialist1/16/13, 2:25 PM

    So beautiful and it touches the reader so deeply.

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  7. Unspoken1/16/13, 9:33 PM

    Yup, the smiles of a child we love are pretty amazing!

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  8. Ben Ditty1/17/13, 12:39 PM

    Your soul is fuller and less shallow than you could ever imagine.

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