Sunday, October 5, 2014

November



Lest I can tell


It twer November
Bouts
When she came to me
Twer November bouts
When she left
No sense with it
Just up an gone
No reason for it
Lest I can tell
Like one of those
Sitcoms the Johnsons
Rave on about
Twer November then
Tiz October now
Was a long time back

Wander

10/5/14

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7 comments:

  1. Berowne10/6/14, 1:37 AM

    Skillful bouts. Very well done.

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  2. Helen Killeen Bauch McHargue10/6/14, 11:02 AM

    "Just up and gone' - how many times have we heard that one from people left behind who don't have a clue. Nice work.

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  3. Tess Kincaid10/6/14, 12:11 PM

    I can hear this one set to music...

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  4. 21 Wits10/6/14, 2:41 PM

    Oh yes, those times a long way back...they can be so real! A smoothly written poem.

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  5. Silent Otto 10/7/14, 2:33 AM

    " you picked a fine time to leave me, Lucille !"

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  6. Yvonne Osborne10/7/14, 4:12 AM

    I like it. Short lines and verbiage seem to fit the photo.

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  7. Mokihana Calizar10/8/14, 1:14 PM

    Nicely done. The cadence a stop and stutter without ever referring to the barbs.

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