Monday, September 7, 2015

Gated community...




On the other side


There we were
At the gate
To the middle
Of nowhere
And I felt
At home
On the other side
Everything opened up wide
There we were
A couple boards
Between you and me
And eternity
There was no latch
So I kicked that fucker down


Chris McQueeney ©2015



Image prompt the Mag
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2015/09/mag-284.html?m=1

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9 comments:

  1. Gemma Wiseman aka Pamela Adams9/7/15, 4:07 AM

    Getting right into the needs of the moment. Loved the shock line.

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  2. Marion9/7/15, 8:00 AM

    Ha! Love the poem, but the ending kicks ass! :-) xo

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  3. Helen9/7/15, 10:23 AM

    I simply LOVE it when twists and turns make me giggle out loud!!

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  4. Other Mary9/7/15, 11:17 AM

    The rhyme and cadence give the final line even more punch. Love this, Chris!

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  5. keiths rambling9/7/15, 3:40 PM

    Well done you. It was a totally un necessary barrier!
    Visit Keith's Ramblings!


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  6. Kutamun9/7/15, 8:41 PM

    Hello , dweller at the threshold !

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  7. Michael9/10/15, 5:00 PM

    That made me giggle

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  8. Ankita 9/10/15, 11:17 PM

    that is interesting!

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  9. kj9/11/15, 9:10 AM

    "at the gate
    to the middle"

    unlike every one else, i didn't much like the shocker, but i liked the whole notion…

    love
    kj

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