Monday, September 7, 2015

Gated community...




On the other side


There we were
At the gate
To the middle
Of nowhere
And I felt
At home
On the other side
Everything opened up wide
There we were
A couple boards
Between you and me
And eternity
There was no latch
So I kicked that fucker down


Chris McQueeney ©2015



Image prompt the Mag
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2015/09/mag-284.html?m=1

9 comments:

  1. Getting right into the needs of the moment. Loved the shock line.

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  2. Ha! Love the poem, but the ending kicks ass! :-) xo

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  3. I simply LOVE it when twists and turns make me giggle out loud!!

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  4. The rhyme and cadence give the final line even more punch. Love this, Chris!

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  5. Well done you. It was a totally un necessary barrier!
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  6. Hello , dweller at the threshold !

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  7. "at the gate
    to the middle"

    unlike every one else, i didn't much like the shocker, but i liked the whole notion…

    love
    kj

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