On the other side
There we were
At the gate
To the middle
Of nowhere
And I felt
At home
On the other side
Everything opened up wide
There we were
A couple boards
Between you and me
And eternity
There was no latch
So I kicked that fucker down
Chris McQueeney ©2015
Image prompt the Mag
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2015/09/mag-284.html?m=1
Getting right into the needs of the moment. Loved the shock line.
ReplyDeleteHa! Love the poem, but the ending kicks ass! :-) xo
ReplyDeleteI simply LOVE it when twists and turns make me giggle out loud!!
ReplyDeleteThe rhyme and cadence give the final line even more punch. Love this, Chris!
ReplyDeleteWell done you. It was a totally un necessary barrier!
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Hello , dweller at the threshold !
ReplyDeleteThat made me giggle
ReplyDeletethat is interesting!
ReplyDelete"at the gate
ReplyDeleteto the middle"
unlike every one else, i didn't much like the shocker, but i liked the whole notion…
love
kj