I wanted to really explore haiku and show its versatility. You know, break down rules, stick it to the man? I think I succeeded in sticking it… in the most platonic way possible. I don’t think poets should be turned off of it because of its rules. It’s a beautiful form of observation and succinct emotion. Syllables are not near as important as the meaning behind them. I think this is true in the Japanese tradition as well as the American. My organization for the poems is four colors, an homage to Basho’s by season. Please, check it out or read a sample. For just pennies a day you can keep this poet off the streets. Maybe I'll even send you a drawing to prove they haven't sold me into prostitution. Here's a few favorites I'd like to share with you:
Twilight spins
Spider webs of hope
Lost
to sight.
We are slaves
Bound to this
Wild
West of love.
I swam inside you
Becoming waves and ripples
In
your heart-shaped lake.
4 comments:
nice ben....some really cool twists in your haiku....congrats on the new book as well....never been much for writing haiku, i do like it when it is well done or creative though...
Thanks, Brian :-)
Damn it, Ben! I am torn between these:
"I swam inside you
Becoming waves and ripples
In your heart-shaped lake."
"I had a vision, ladies and gentlemen, or conversely jezebels and hooligans."
The first made me pause and think, "What a romantic." The second made me laugh. Why must there always be hooligans where there are Jezebels? Answer me that, if you can.
Thanks for the blog.Really thank you! Fantastic.
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