Tuesday, January 10, 2012

You wish me



You wish me
To wax poetic this soon
After waking?

Thinking of you
Sinking into me
Holding you…

Waking next to you is like opening my eyes
Finding the storm has finally broken
And the sun has shown through

You wish me
To wax poetic this soon
After waking?

How so
You leave me
Without words…

Chris McQueeney 1/10/12   2:33PM

Posted for Thursday Poet’s Rally 1/12-/18/12 on Promising Poet’s Parking Lot
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18 comments:

  1. Jasmine1/10/12, 9:16 PM

    ...simply beautiful

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  2. Wine and Words1/11/12, 8:51 AM

    The things we wish of another are often not probable. So we wish all the harder, and the probability increasingly receeds with our reach.

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  3. robin1/11/12, 11:31 PM

    beautiful fantasy but you can make it true, just believe

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  4. booguloo1/12/12, 1:42 AM

    I find this sad.

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  5. Isabel1/12/12, 10:04 AM

    "you leave me without words" great line

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  6. Anonymous1/12/12, 12:53 PM

    Makes me want to go to bed and wake up again... I like your words here.

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  7. Anonymous1/12/12, 1:09 PM

    How touching, awwww. great work

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  8. Alcina1/12/12, 8:08 PM

    Like this.loosing words is best described..
    Nice piece!

    Afixxion Addixt-The enigma

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  9. Susie Clevenger1/12/12, 10:17 PM

    It seems you did wax poetic :) beautiful piece

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  10. Wander1/13/12, 12:39 AM

    Thank you all for wandering by, I am having difficulities commenting and replying to some...@ wine you are one of the ones I can't reply to dont get it...

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  11. RachelW1/14/12, 6:01 PM

    Ah, I like this. Sleepy.

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  12. The Poet1/14/12, 7:56 PM

    Hello.
    Very pleasing poem. Great flow.
    Nice ending.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Harp Of My Soul

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  13. ~L1/17/12, 7:03 AM

    Very Nice:) love the flow of this one:)

    ~L

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  14. Melissa Ridley Elmes1/17/12, 5:57 PM

    I love the waking stanza, when the storm clouds dissipate. :o)
    Here's my offering for the week: http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2012/01/13/friday-the-13th-made-you-look-and-also-dear-homer-drafting/
    happy rally!

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  15. Anonymous1/25/12, 5:36 AM

    My first thoughts: "awwwwwwwwwwww" (and it was in that super girly tone of voice I try not to do).

    This is really lovely, not only in terms of content but I love the structure of this poem too - it has an easy flow to it, where you can kind of just sink into it.

    Great work!

    Here's mine for the rally: Ripples and the Anchor

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  16. Anonymous1/30/12, 4:18 AM

    awww, the power of a great sleep, leaves us speechless! lol, I like the pic, the spontaneity of the piece, thanks for your thoughtful comment and visit! Happy gooseberry day!

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  17. Anonymous1/31/12, 4:01 AM

    Lovely poem. K.

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  18. Mark2/15/12, 11:29 AM

    Romantic stuff...beyond words

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