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Monday, September 7, 2015

Gated community...




On the other side


There we were
At the gate
To the middle
Of nowhere
And I felt
At home
On the other side
Everything opened up wide
There we were
A couple boards
Between you and me
And eternity
There was no latch
So I kicked that fucker down


Chris McQueeney ©2015



Image prompt the Mag
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2015/09/mag-284.html?m=1

9 comments:

Gemma Wiseman said...

Getting right into the needs of the moment. Loved the shock line.

Marion Lawless said...

Ha! Love the poem, but the ending kicks ass! :-) xo

Helen said...

I simply LOVE it when twists and turns make me giggle out loud!!

Other Mary said...

The rhyme and cadence give the final line even more punch. Love this, Chris!

keiths rambling said...

Well done you. It was a totally un necessary barrier!
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Kutamun said...

Hello , dweller at the threshold !

Michael said...

That made me giggle

Ankita said...

that is interesting!

kj said...

"at the gate
to the middle"

unlike every one else, i didn't much like the shocker, but i liked the whole notion…

love
kj