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Monday, April 29, 2013

the dinner roll was just to hard

We meet

We all sat down at the table
to eat
To eat
Rice pudding cake and
 Some meat
Some meat
then that dammed rabbit used his tongue not
His feet
His feet
Tiz a fight for blood with
No retreat
 No retreat
 We all sat down at the table
 To eat
To eat
Instead of food in battle
We meet
 We meet

Chris McQueeney

Blogger is doing strange things to me through my phone this is my 15th attempt to post this...this is in resp once to the image Tess put up on  The Mag...if you can please post a link to the mag in the comment thread for other readers to follow

5 comments:

Brian Miller said...

ha. nice...cool use of repetition in this...gives it a rather sing song feel...dang rabbit using his tongue...smiles...a battle it is...
good to see you

BerlinerinPoet said...

This is interesting. It has a marching sort of quality about it.

christopher said...

I posted and linked for you Chris.

Tess Kincaid said...

Thanks for your help Chris...now I'm craving rice pudding...

Ben Ditty said...

Interesting idea, comparing food to battle. It seems all to like some meals my family's had.