We meet
We all sat down at the table
to eat
To eat
Rice pudding cake and
Some meat
Some meat
then that dammed rabbit used his tongue not
His feet
His feet
Tiz a fight for blood with
No retreat
No retreat
We all sat down at the table
To eat
To eat
Instead of food in battle
We meet
We meet
Chris McQueeney
Blogger is doing strange things to me through my phone this is my 15th attempt to post this...this is in resp once to the image Tess put up on The Mag...if you can please post a link to the mag in the comment thread for other readers to follow
We all sat down at the table
to eat
To eat
Rice pudding cake and
Some meat
Some meat
then that dammed rabbit used his tongue not
His feet
His feet
Tiz a fight for blood with
No retreat
No retreat
We all sat down at the table
To eat
To eat
Instead of food in battle
We meet
We meet
Chris McQueeney
Blogger is doing strange things to me through my phone this is my 15th attempt to post this...this is in resp once to the image Tess put up on The Mag...if you can please post a link to the mag in the comment thread for other readers to follow
5 comments:
ha. nice...cool use of repetition in this...gives it a rather sing song feel...dang rabbit using his tongue...smiles...a battle it is...
good to see you
This is interesting. It has a marching sort of quality about it.
I posted and linked for you Chris.
Thanks for your help Chris...now I'm craving rice pudding...
Interesting idea, comparing food to battle. It seems all to like some meals my family's had.
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