Imaginative thought. Perfect moment.
Yessir, that's a poem.
just a few words, yet beautifully sayingso much.nicely done!love the image.
there's something so suggestively dark and mysterious about this...
Very nice. I have one called "And Still" too. There is something about those words.
This reminds me of the movie, and how alcohol robs so many of their best selves. Very evocative of loss and perhaps regret.
you are a deep thinker, chris, and yet you convey your thoughts and experiences in such simple language.and the word cloy! i'll find a way to use that somewhere !memories. i used to think they existed in the past, but now i know better.happy weekend mr wander♥kj
Brought to mind the movie for me. Very nicely put.
Love this: "Scent of denialFragrant" and your final thought as well.~Shawnarosemarymint.wordpress.com
the scent of denial is a great opening line...and sadly the alcohol will rob...
Great opening line...scent of denial...contrasting with wine and roses ~
I suck at interpreting poetry... maybe I'm not deep enough, or perhaps I'm too literal, or maybe just dense. However, I trust your words. They are always believable and so...here, I believe there is pain.OH... and I learned a new word: cloying
@ all thank you for your comments...Shannon you are very close...I am blunt with a lot of my poetry...a lot of it has very personal meaning and I guess I am not a patient poet even though I try to write in a general way I don't try to intentionally obfuscate so as to sound grandiose or deep. just me...
Very imaginative,great use of the prompts
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