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Thursday, September 6, 2012

Lucky





How lucky am I


My hands in your Hair
Holding you just so…kissing you
Not willing to let go
The clamoring of the world fades
In your lips I find No need to breathe
So willing to leave the world behind
My hands in your hair
Your lips on mine
Feeling you melt into me
How lucky am I


Chris McQueeney    9/6/12    8:02 P.M.

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15 comments:

Ben Ditty said...

You have the most incredible genius of repetition, Chris.

She Writes said...

Hmmmm, are you in love, or like, or maybe something near :-). Me, being curious, I have to smile as I read. Ever the romantic!

Brian Miller said...

most def....but hey i dont mind being lucky in love...love the feel of this piece man....

G-Man said...

Chris...
What a heartfelt piece of work.
Very creative and beautiful.
Loved your Romantic 55
Thanks for playing, I appreciate you sharing such Top Notch entertainment with us all, please have a Kick Ass Week-End

Linc said...

This is incredible! But that pic is creepy (but cool) as hell, not sure it goes with the poem. Bravo!

Alice Audrey said...

Very lucky, if you can keep it going.

Margaret said...

Love the words... but the photo selection leads me to a different place!

Jira said...

Adding the picture with the poem makes me see the red of sarcasm...

Nadja Notariani said...

You will become a famous romance writer...I can see it now! Ha. Oh! Crap! I will have to compete with you for business...

The Stealthy Ninja will have an eye on THAT.

kj said...

honestly, not my favorite (i can say this after loving a hundred of your poems, right?) it doesn''t take me far enough into the passionate danger of yielding and letting go

xoxo
kj

kj said...

the morning after:

oh jeez. maybe i should have said 'i did too'

:^)

love you chris
kj

Wander said...

Hi Kj:-)
You are welcome to like or dislike any of my poems or pros my friend...and feel free to day so!

kj said...

BerlinerinPoet said...

So sweet!

just a girl said...

sounds like you're pretty damn lucky!

:)