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Tuesday, January 10, 2012

You wish me



You wish me
To wax poetic this soon
After waking?

Thinking of you
Sinking into me
Holding you…

Waking next to you is like opening my eyes
Finding the storm has finally broken
And the sun has shown through

You wish me
To wax poetic this soon
After waking?

How so
You leave me
Without words…

Chris McQueeney 1/10/12   2:33PM

Posted for Thursday Poet’s Rally 1/12-/18/12 on Promising Poet’s Parking Lot

18 comments:

Jasmine said...

...simply beautiful

Wine and Words said...

The things we wish of another are often not probable. So we wish all the harder, and the probability increasingly receeds with our reach.

robin said...

beautiful fantasy but you can make it true, just believe

booguloo said...

I find this sad.

Isabel said...

"you leave me without words" great line

torquethis said...

Makes me want to go to bed and wake up again... I like your words here.

Quotes,Photos and a little Poetry said...

How touching, awwww. great work

Alcina said...

Like this.loosing words is best described..
Nice piece!

Afixxion Addixt-The enigma

Susie Clevenger said...

It seems you did wax poetic :) beautiful piece

Wander said...

Thank you all for wandering by, I am having difficulities commenting and replying to some...@ wine you are one of the ones I can't reply to dont get it...

RachelW said...

Ah, I like this. Sleepy.

Andy said...

Hello.
Very pleasing poem. Great flow.
Nice ending.
Thanks for sharing.

Harp Of My Soul

~L said...

Very Nice:) love the flow of this one:)

~L

Melissa Ridley Elmes said...

I love the waking stanza, when the storm clouds dissipate. :o)
Here's my offering for the week: http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2012/01/13/friday-the-13th-made-you-look-and-also-dear-homer-drafting/
happy rally!

cursemymetalbody said...

My first thoughts: "awwwwwwwwwwww" (and it was in that super girly tone of voice I try not to do).

This is really lovely, not only in terms of content but I love the structure of this poem too - it has an easy flow to it, where you can kind of just sink into it.

Great work!

Here's mine for the rally: Ripples and the Anchor

lynnaima said...

awww, the power of a great sleep, leaves us speechless! lol, I like the pic, the spontaneity of the piece, thanks for your thoughtful comment and visit! Happy gooseberry day!

manicddaily said...

Lovely poem. K.

Mark said...

Romantic stuff...beyond words