The things we wish of another are often not probable. So we wish all the harder, and the probability increasingly receeds with our reach.
beautiful fantasy but you can make it true, just believe
I find this sad.
"you leave me without words" great line
Makes me want to go to bed and wake up again... I like your words here.
How touching, awwww. great work
Like this.loosing words is best described..Nice piece!Afixxion Addixt-The enigma
It seems you did wax poetic :) beautiful piece
Thank you all for wandering by, I am having difficulities commenting and replying to some...@ wine you are one of the ones I can't reply to dont get it...
Ah, I like this. Sleepy.
Hello.Very pleasing poem. Great flow.Nice ending.Thanks for sharing.Harp Of My Soul
Very Nice:) love the flow of this one:) ~L
I love the waking stanza, when the storm clouds dissipate. :o)Here's my offering for the week: http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2012/01/13/friday-the-13th-made-you-look-and-also-dear-homer-drafting/ happy rally!
My first thoughts: "awwwwwwwwwwww" (and it was in that super girly tone of voice I try not to do).This is really lovely, not only in terms of content but I love the structure of this poem too - it has an easy flow to it, where you can kind of just sink into it.Great work!Here's mine for the rally: Ripples and the Anchor
awww, the power of a great sleep, leaves us speechless! lol, I like the pic, the spontaneity of the piece, thanks for your thoughtful comment and visit! Happy gooseberry day!
Lovely poem. K.
Romantic stuff...beyond words
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