Taking up space
Home
less
that's where I be
on this chilled afternoon
something has got to break
for me soon
can only ride so far
when you got nowhere to be
hope
less
is not a place to envy
me here you there
tell me
what do you see
a person
or just something taking up space
Wander 1/9/15
4 comments:
What a sad, sad piece. Your line breaks are well placed, the way you break up hope-less and home-less. Good one.
sad in how some see the homeless...i hope that this is you speaking for another and not of yourself man...its tough....
Brian I was homeless last year at this time and it sucked nothing to be said positive about being homeless.
I see a person! :)
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