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Sunday, November 23, 2014

The mag 247





Just So


She walks in twilight
Rather than day
Mid afternoon rays just
A bit to much
She likes dew on the leaves
The soft light strikes it
Just so
Offers up a particular glow
Just so just so
Just so
She walks in twilight
Rather than night
Nights dark rays subtle
Softened as she walks
Past twisted trees
Like goalposts they stand
Against night’s encroachment
She walks in twilight
Rather than day
The light is just so
Just so just so



Chris McQueeney    11/23/14


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9 comments:

Kathe W. said...

Nicely done- I like the "just so" repetition.

Liz Rice-Sosne said...

There is a loneliness in this painting that you have captured in your poem.

Theresa Milstein said...

I had assumed it was day because of those tiny bits of blue. It was a nice shift to think of a walk at twilight.

Kutamun said...

The magic hour , that hoary liminal zone , excellent mate

Yvonne Mokihana Calizar said...

I enjoyed the walk you took, what you sawed me, 'just so.'

Yvonne Mokihana Calizar said...

I enjoyed the walk we took, the things important to you 'just so.'

Berowne said...

A beautiful take on the familiar "She walks in beauty like the night..." Well done.

Karen S. said...

Just so- delightful!

Truedessa said...

She walks in twilight..just so..has a nice easy flow