Just
So
She
walks in twilight
Rather
than day
Mid
afternoon rays just
A
bit to much
She
likes dew on the leaves
The
soft light strikes it
Just
so
Offers
up a particular glow
Just
so just so
Just
so
She
walks in twilight
Rather
than night
Nights
dark rays subtle
Softened
as she walks
Past
twisted trees
Like
goalposts they stand
Against
night’s encroachment
She
walks in twilight
Rather
than day
The
light is just so
Just
so just so
Chris
McQueeney 11/23/14
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9 comments:
Nicely done- I like the "just so" repetition.
There is a loneliness in this painting that you have captured in your poem.
I had assumed it was day because of those tiny bits of blue. It was a nice shift to think of a walk at twilight.
The magic hour , that hoary liminal zone , excellent mate
I enjoyed the walk you took, what you sawed me, 'just so.'
I enjoyed the walk we took, the things important to you 'just so.'
A beautiful take on the familiar "She walks in beauty like the night..." Well done.
Just so- delightful!
She walks in twilight..just so..has a nice easy flow
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