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Saturday, December 27, 2014

haiku for saturday





The tree sheds it's leaves
on an expectant ground so
Fine watch for falling

foliage in the air 
the carpet of leaves so fine
waiting for winter


I was invited to post a haiku so I thought I would give it a go. In traditional haiku the lines go five syllables then seven then five again and has something to do with nature. 

15 comments:

Fatiha Kabena Storm Brothers said...

lovely nature haiku.

Alissa Meredith Osborn Schapiro said...

animated imagery, superb haiku.

Kimberly Erica Jack Schmidly said...

the imagery is pure pleasure,
I am moved for your poetic talent here.

;)

Anonymous said...

detective eye for seasonal changes.

Matt OffenSend Kivatinos Nusimow said...

nice

happy new year.

Madeline Anthony Herzig Jackson said...

spring is near,
happy new year.

Penelope Maclver Hansen-Cutts Putin said...

the vague or soft part of life is validated.

Abigail Charles Blount Fallin said...

tree haiku is cool.
so does the spring season theme one.

Goce Bristol Tamhane Sahakian said...

wonderful observation.

Nancy Beebe Goolsby Tramel-Federle said...

talented write.

Prem Laszlo Shrock Riesbeck Ottino said...

deep thoughts, well penned.

Pamela Kennedy Connie Bona said...

abstract imagery.

Jessica Theodoragoss Sharp-Block Bloomberg said...

lovely.

Maggie Attino-Frankford Shapirol said...

impressive.

Iremonger JacoBus Quinlan Pickens said...

happy new year.