The tree sheds it's leaves
on an expectant ground so
Fine watch for falling
foliage in the air
the carpet of leaves so fine
waiting for winter
I was invited to post a haiku so I thought I would give it a go. In traditional haiku the lines go five syllables then seven then five again and has something to do with nature.
14 comments:
lovely nature haiku.
animated imagery, superb haiku.
the imagery is pure pleasure,
I am moved for your poetic talent here.
;)
detective eye for seasonal changes.
nice
happy new year.
spring is near,
happy new year.
the vague or soft part of life is validated.
tree haiku is cool.
so does the spring season theme one.
wonderful observation.
talented write.
deep thoughts, well penned.
abstract imagery.
impressive.
happy new year.
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