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Saturday, December 27, 2014

haiku for saturday





The tree sheds it's leaves
on an expectant ground so
Fine watch for falling

foliage in the air 
the carpet of leaves so fine
waiting for winter


I was invited to post a haiku so I thought I would give it a go. In traditional haiku the lines go five syllables then seven then five again and has something to do with nature. 

14 comments:

Drew Doyle Storm Snyder Minow said...

lovely nature haiku.

Alissa Meredith Jill Osborn Schapiro said...

animated imagery, superb haiku.

Anonymous said...

the imagery is pure pleasure,
I am moved for your poetic talent here.

;)

Anonymous said...

detective eye for seasonal changes.

Anonymous said...

nice

happy new year.

Anonymous said...

spring is near,
happy new year.

Anonymous said...

the vague or soft part of life is validated.

Abbey Michael Boyle Blount Fallin said...

tree haiku is cool.
so does the spring season theme one.

Unknown said...

wonderful observation.

Anonymous said...

talented write.

Anonymous said...

deep thoughts, well penned.

Pamela Ken Drummond Chuck Robbins said...

abstract imagery.

Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-Walton said...

impressive.

Iremonger Lindsay JacoBus Quinlan Pickens said...

happy new year.