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Sunday, October 5, 2014

November



Lest I can tell


It twer November
Bouts
When she came to me
Twer November bouts
When she left
No sense with it
Just up an gone
No reason for it
Lest I can tell
Like one of those
Sitcoms the Johnsons
Rave on about
Twer November then
Tiz October now
Was a long time back

Wander

10/5/14

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7 comments:

Berowne said...

Skillful bouts. Very well done.

Helen Bauch McHargue said...

"Just up and gone' - how many times have we heard that one from people left behind who don't have a clue. Nice work.

Tess Kincaid said...

I can hear this one set to music...

Karen S. said...

Oh yes, those times a long way back...they can be so real! A smoothly written poem.

Kutamun said...

" you picked a fine time to leave me, Lucille !"

Yvonne Osborne said...

I like it. Short lines and verbiage seem to fit the photo.

Mokihana Calizar said...

Nicely done. The cadence a stop and stutter without ever referring to the barbs.